2015中考英语满分特训 写作(21)

（21）写作典例分析(三)

健康是幸福生活的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全体成员做一个“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。(2013，吉林) 要求：1. 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．所给提示仅供参考，需适当发挥； 3．文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。 提示：a balanced diet；enough exercise；be happy

Dear friends，

It's a great honor to speak here.My topic is“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”．

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一、思路分析

1．审题。

仔细审题，明确写作要求，确定文章的体裁、时态和格式。本篇书面表达是一篇介绍健康重要性 的报告。文章总体应以一般现在时态为主。 2．注意写作要点，梳理写作框架。 本篇书面表达是给出提示要点的作文，所给提示的内容一定要写全面，按照提示词的思路进行写作。 3．连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。

在写作过程中，考生应适当运用连词，使文章过渡自然。最后检查作文时，还要注意单词拼写、 标点符号、字母大小写等细节问题。

二、经典范文欣赏

【美文欣赏】

Dear friends，

It's a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”. I'm so glad you care about health like me. Good health may bring us a long happy life, good work and even better grades. Keeping healthy is really important.

As for the secrets of keeping healthy, I think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important. First, it's helpful to have enough sleep and a balanced diet. Breakfast is the top meal of the day, so we can't miss it.At the same time, find a physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it. I have kept playing ping­pong for seven years and I really enjoy doing that. Also, everyone should always be a happy person.

I hope you care about your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever! Thanks for listening!